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Mrs. Green

I t is a very big frog . Her name is Mrs. Green. She is soft, green and very cute :).
- But what does she do?
She could consoles or makes laugh.
- But How does she do?
Her right little paw has got a handkerchief. She can feel your sadness. When you are drying Mrs. Green is wipi ng your tears. When you are happy Mrs. Green is happy too. She can laugh or tell jokes. She can be almost like you. But if you want a cool toy you must talking with her. Mrs. Green has a bad days too , so when she has got it you must console her. Mrs. Green can beet your shyness, but you must want it. I think she would be your best friend or the best toy. I wish you a successful play with Mrs. Green :))

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Odpowiedzi

2009-11-12T22:00:00+01:00
W pierwszym zdaniu It's. Reszta jest dobrze.
2009-11-12T22:22:06+01:00
Powinnas poprawic she , her
she - it (it is )
her - its
nie jestem pewna na 100% ale ja bym tak poprawila