Czy mógłby ktoś sprawdzić ewentualnie poprawic albo dodać coś? :)

Jesteś na wakacjach u swoich angielskich przyjaciół. Podczas ich nieobecności odwiedził ich ktoś, kto wyglądał na wyraźnie zatroskanego. Napisz notatkę, w której:
- podasz im szczegóły wizyty
- opiszesz wygląd gościa
- opiszesz krótko jego zachowanie
- wyjaśnij, jakie uczucia wywołała w Tobie ta wizyta.

Ed,
Yesterday when you weren't at home young guy came to you. It was about five o'clock. He was tall and tanned and he had short black hair. He looked like worried and he wanted to meeting with you. When I said that you went out he walked away even more worried. I thought you should know about it. Unfortunately I forgot his name by nerve... Sory! I hope that you know who it was.

XYZ

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2009-11-23T21:01:16+01:00
To co poprawiłam pisze z CAPS LOCKIEM

Ed,
Yesterday when you weren't at home A young guy came to you. It was about five o'clock. He was tall, ( BEZ AND) tanned and he had short (PRZECINEK) black hair. He looked like HE WAS REALLY worried ABOUT SOMETHING and he wanted to TALK TO you. When I said that you went out he walked away LOOKING even more worried. I thought you should know about it. Unfortunately ( PRZECINEK) I forgot his name ( BEZ BY NERVE )... SorRy! I hope that you know who it was.

XYZ
2009-11-23T21:04:44+01:00
The young guy came to you when you were not at home. It was about five o'clock. He was tall and tanned and he had short black hair. He looked like he was worried and he wanted to meet with you. When I said you went out he walked away more worried. I thought you should know about it. Unfortunately I forgot his name because I was nervous... Sory! I hope you know who was it.
2009-11-23T21:22:10+01:00
Ed,
Yesterday when you weren't at home a young guy came to you. It was about five o'clock. He was tall and tanned and he had short, black hair. He looked worried and he wanted to meet with you. When I said that you went out he went back even more worried. I thought I should tell you about it. Unfortunately I forgot his name I was so nervous... Sorry! I hope that you knew who was it.

XYZ