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On holiday I'm going to leave with my parents on the sea. We are going to go out in June.
I spend three weeks in London. We are going to there by plane. In London we are stayed in hotel.
First we are going visited the Buckingham Place. Than we are going seeing a Big Ben and Tower of London.
In July we are going to the sea. Everyday we are sunbathe on the beach, swim in the sea and collect shells and starfish. Summers days are long and the nights are short and warm. In the evening we can have a bonfire or watch the skies laying the beach.
We are going to stay there until month.
In the last week I'm going to the cinema with my cousine Patryk .Than I'm going to my friends birthday party.
I thing it's going to be an interesting holiday.

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2009-11-28T20:09:38+01:00
On holidays I'm going to go with my parents on the sea. We are going start our holidays in June.
I will spend three weeks in London. We are going to there by plane. In London we are staying in hotel.
First we are going to visit the Buckingham Place. Than we are going to see a Big Ben and Tower of London.
In July we are going to the sea. Everyday we are sunbathing on the beach, swimming in the sea and collecting shells and starfish. Summer days are long and the nights are short and warm. In the evenings we can have a bonfire or watch the skies laying the beach.
We are going to stay there for month.
In the last week of holidays I'm going to the cinema with my cousine Patryk .Than I'm going to my friend's birthday party.
I thing it's going to be great time