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My childhood.
I was born in 1993, in a small city Chelmno. Before my birth my family had left in a village. When I was three months old my grandfather died. He had cancer. My mum told me that after that we went to life in other home. I remember that when I was four years old I had a room with my sister Daria. Daria Is 2 years older than me. When I was 5 years old I went to infant school/ I remember that this school lie close by tower blocks. And after school I went with my friend to play ahead one of tower blocks. When I was 7 years old, I think, we removed. We lived in the same city, but not in the same home. We had 7 neighbours. And four of them were drinkers, so it was never silent. Practical every day we heard a wrangle. They came drunken and beat they children and wife’s. And after one year I think, they wife’s began drink with their husbands. It was even bad, because the children stayed alone at home also for night. And they weren’t older than me. I remember good one wrangle. It was between two neighbours , Mrs. Beltner and MRS. Ziolkowski. They were as always drunken. And they spoke about something, and then they began disputed. Paulina, daughter of MRS. Ziolkowski began cry. I tried help her but what could I do? Nothing. And then my mother screamed me. She was scared.
I went to school when I was seven. I had as always problem with speak with people, but I had two friends: Natalia and Asia. I was a good pupil.
When I was 8 years old, I went to hospital. I had Gardia Lamblie. And when I was 9 years old, I went second time to hospital, because it was something wrong with my heart. The doctor said that I have to go to a psychologist because I worried about everything. My heart became good, so I could go home. When I was 10 years old, we removed to village Rzeczyca. I befriend there with Marta. I was happy because I could have dog and cats. I fell there also in love. His name was Bartek. I and my family lived in a small home. We had to go bring water from wells. Sometimes, during winter it was min 20 degrees Celsius in us kitchen. So us deep freezer didn’t work, it was too cold. My mother went first to Germany for seasonal work. And then called my uncle, and my mother went to Belgium. We stayed in Rzeczyca still one year. And after this year we came to Belgium. The first year was really difficult. I had to study Dutch, and I would not be here. I had alone polish friends, because I was angry when I had to speak Dutch. Now I know that it was stupid. After this year I went back to Poland. I went to grammar school. I lived with my grandmother and two cousins. This year I drunk, smoked cigarettes and was really drunken for first time. It was during a focus. And boys bought beer and vodka. And they had also cigarettes. When I came home I went sleep, because it was late. My grandmother had slept also, so she didn’t see me. My cousin saw me drunk but said nothing. Next day I had to go to school, with a headache. I was after this two times drunken and then not more.
In 2007 I came back to Belgium, to my family, and I went to 3 class.
Z gory dziekuje.

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2009-11-29T20:27:42+01:00
My childhood.
I was born in 1993, in a small town Chelmno. Before my birth my family had left in a village. When I was three months my grandfather died. He was cancer. My mum told me after that we went to life in other home. I remember when I was four years old I was a room with my sister Daria. Daria is 2 years older than me. When I was 5 years old I went to infant school. I remember that this school lie close by tower blocks. And after school I went with my friend to play ahead one of tower blocks. When I was 7 years old, I think, we removed. We lived in the same city, but not in the same home. We were 7 neighbours. And four of them were drinkers, so it was never silent. Practical every day we heard a wrangle. They came drunken and beat they children and wife’s. And after one year I think, they wife’s began drink with their husbands. It was even bad, because the children stayed alone at home also for night. And they weren’t older than me. I remember good one wrangle. It was between two neighbours , Mrs. Beltner and MRS. Ziolkowski. They were as always drunken. And they spoke about something, and then they began disputed. Paulina, daughter of MRS. Ziolkowski began cry. I tried help her but what could I do? Nothing. And then my mother screamed me. She was scared.
I went to school when I was seven. I was as always problem with speak with people, but I had two friends: Natalia and Asia. I was a good pupil.
When I was 8 years old, I went to hospital. I had Gardia Lamblie. And when I was 9 years old, I went second time to hospital, because it was something wrong with my heart. The doctor said that I have to go to a psychologist because I worried about everything. My heart became good, so I could go home. When I was 10 years old, we removed to village Rzeczyca. I befriend there with Marta. I was happy because I could have dog and cats. I fell there also in love. His name was Bartek. I and my family lived in a small home. We had to go bring water from wells. Sometimes, during winter it was min 20 degrees Celsius in us kitchen. So us deep freezer didn’t work, it was too cold. My mother went first to Germany for seasonal work. And then called my uncle, and my mother went to Belgium. We stayed in Rzeczyca still one year. And after this year we came to Belgium. The first year was really difficult. I had to study Dutch, and I would not be here. I had alone polish friends, because I was angry when I had to speak Dutch. Now I know that it was stupid. After this year I went back to Poland. I went to grammar school. I lived with my grandmother and two cousins. This year I drunk, smoked cigarettes and was really drunken for first time. It was during a focus. And boys bought beer and vodka. And they had also cigarettes. When I came home I went sleep, because it was late. My grandmother had slept also, so she didn’t see me. My cousin saw me drunk but said nothing. Next day I went to school, with a headache. I was after this two times drunken and then not more.
In 2007 I came back to Belgium, to my family, and I went to 3 class.
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