Proszę o poprawienie błędów :(

Dear Sir or Madam
I am writing in response to your advertisement which appeared in "University Paper" on 11 May. I would like to apply for the school teacher job.

I am twenty-three years old and I am a student of pedagogy. I like listening to music and practising sport.

I think that it would be suitable to mention that I am a responsible, ambitious and easy-going person. I am also creative and I would like to work with children.

I am looking forward to hear from you.

Yours sincerely,

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Odpowiedzi

2009-11-30T20:50:32+01:00
Ja tu żadnych błędów nie widze. Ale może jakieś są ;p
2009-11-30T20:51:04+01:00
I like listen to music and practise sport. (czasowniki uczuc (like,love,hate etc) zawsze w present simple).

poza tym to jest bardzo dobrze, zwiezle i tresciwie napisane ;)