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Dear Mr Harris,
Further to our cenversation, I am writing to
confirm that we will be stay at your hotel for a
total of four nights, arriving on 22nd April and
leaving on 26th April.
Some friends of ours have said us about the
luxuty room available in the hotel and we would
like ask about the price of this room. We would
also be grateful if you could tell them about
the sports facilities the hotel has and if we will
be able use the swimming pool.
On the telephone you metioned that it will be
possible to hire a car directly from the hotel. Do you
think you could e-mail me the details of this service,
so that we can calculate how days we would like to
reserve the car for ?
I be making a bank transfer tomorrow to cover the
amaount of the deposit. Please could you let me know
when you will receive the transfer, and send me a
receipt?
I looking forward to hearing from you.
Your sincerely,
XYZ

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2009-09-06T16:44:54+02:00
Dear Mr Harris,
Further to our cenversation, I am writing to
confirm that we will stay at your hotel for a
total of four nights, arriving on 22nd April and
leaving on 26th April.
Some friends of us have said about the
luxuty room available in the hotel and we would
like ask about the price of this room. We would
also be grateful if you could tell us about
the sports facilities the hotel has and if we will
be able use the swimming pool.
On the telephone you metioned that it will be
possible to hire a car directly from the hotel. Do you
think you can e-mail me the details of this service,
so that we can calculate how many days we would like to
reserve the car for ?
I will be making a bank transfer tomorrow to cover the
amaount of the deposit. Please can you let me know
when you will receive the transfer, and send me a
receipt?
Im looking forward to hearing from you.
Your sincerely,
XYZ


Myślę, że to chyba tyle ale dla pewności poradź się jeszcze kogoś:)