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Hi Daniel !

Thanks for your last e-mail. How nice of you write a letter!
I'm really happy that you want to visit my country.

I thing you should come to Cracov in July, because in this month i very hot and I will have a free time. I can show nice plece and beatiful monumets.
I think you schould visit Wawel, Mariacki church and antique Kopalnia Soli in Wieliczka. If I were you, i'd travel by bus, because is slowly not too but not too expensive. You won't regret if you stay in Grand Hotel". It is not expensive, but nice and comfortable.

I'm looking forward to seeing you soon. Take care.
XYZ





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2009-12-14T13:58:06+01:00
1)visit IN my country.
2) this month IS very hot

;)
2009-12-14T14:01:37+01:00
Hi Daniel !

Thanks for your last e-mail. How nice of you to write a letter!
I'm really happy that you want to visit my country.

I think you should come to Cracov in July, because in this month it's very hot and I will have some free time. I can show you nice places and beautiful monumets.
I think you should visit Wawel, Mariacki church and antique Kopalnia Soli in Wieliczka. If I were you, i'd travel by bus, because it's not too slow and not too expensive. You won't regret if you stay in Grand Hotel. It is not expensive, but nice and comfortable.

I'm looking forward to see you soon. Take care.
XYZ

Troszkę błędów. To jest już poprawione wypracowanie, żeby nie było, że tylko skopiowałam. Jak dostaniesz ocenę to daj znac jaką ;]
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2009-12-14T14:36:47+01:00
Hi Daniel !

Thanks for your last e-mail. How nice of you to write a letter!
I'm really happy that you want to visit my country.

I think you should come to Cracov in July, because in this month it's very hot and I will have free time. I can show you nice places and beautiful monumets.
I think you should visit Wawel, Mariacki church and antique Kopalnia Soli in Wieliczka. If I were you, i'd travel by bus, because it's not too slow and not too expensive. You won't regret if you stay in Grand Hotel. It is not expensive, but nice and comfortable.

I'm looking forward to see you soon. Take care.
XYZ

Chyba dobrze ;P