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Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing in response to your advertisment in last but one ediction of the ,,New Time".
I have 17 years old and I am creative woman.This advertised were interested me because I won't to work in future as journalist.
I think that I am a good person to this job. For a long time I am editing a school newspaper.
I could begin work from every day and any time. I have some question how much is the salary?
Can you give me quickly answer because if you don't give me this job I must look for something another. Could you send me list of documents, that I must delivered?
I look forward to heaving from you.

Yours faithfully,
XYZ

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Najlepsza Odpowiedź!
2009-12-14T20:30:27+01:00
Na moje oko powinno być:

advertisement nie advertisment
on last np. Monday

albo cale zdanie tak: I am writing in response to your advertisement which appeared in the yesterday's 'New Time'

nie: I have
tylko: I am 17....

nie: This advertised were interested me because I won't to work in future as journalist.
tylko I am interested in your advertisement, because in the future I would be work as a journalist.

nie: I think that I am a good person to this job. For a long time I am editing a school newspaper.
tylko: I think that I am a good person for this job because I have been written to a school magazine for a long time. This gave me a lot of experience.

nie: I could begin work from every day and any time.
tylko: The work I can start/begin for now, but I have one question: how much is the salary ?

nie: Can you give me quickly answer because if you don't give me this job I must look for something another. Could you send me list of documents, that I must delivered?
tylko: I would appreciate it if you would give me quick answer, failing I have to look for another job.
Could you please send me a list of documents, which I must deliver?

na końcu nie: heaving
tylko: hearing
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