Sprawdź czy jest to dobrze i skróć, ale tak aby wszystko było na swoim miejscu. Ma być to w formie ustnego opowiadania danej historyjki, czy można tak ją powiedzieć?

On Saturday, the Laura and her sister were playing In the garden with neighbour’s dog when began to rain heavily. They run back home. Mother asked them to close all windows. While doing it the Laura heard some noise, sounded to the train and Susan started to panic. Mother asked her to stop panicking and took girls to the basement, where they heard strong wind. Suddenly, something crashed and the sister started to cry, but mother and the Laura tried to stay calm. After some time, everything stopped and girls with mother came back home, which had damaged windows. But outside it was much worse – all trees and cars were destroyed. The neighbor was worried, because he lost his dog. Unfortunately girls found him in the bushes. Everybody was terrified after this experience, but all in all everything has ended luckily

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2009-09-15T17:34:08+02:00
Laura and her sister were playing in the garden with neighbour's dog, when rain start to fall heavily. They ran back home.Laura heard some noise and Susan started to panic. Mother took girls to the basement. Suddenly, something crashed. Susan started to cry and panic again. After some time everything stoppped they came back home. The house had damaged windows, trees and cars were destroyed. The neighbour lost his dog. Fortunately girls found him in the bushes. All in all everything has ended luckily.