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Laura and her sister were playing in the garden with neighbour's dog, when rain start to fall heavily. They ran back home.Laura heard some noise and Susan started to panic. Mother took girls to the basement. Suddenly, something crashed. Susan started to cry and panic again. After some time everything stoppped they came back home. The house had damaged windows, trees and cars were destroyed. The neighbour lost his dog. Fortunately girls found him in the bushes. All in all everything has ended luckily.

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2009-09-15T20:35:59+02:00
Laura and her sister were PLAYED in the garden with neighbour's dog, when IT STARTS RAIN . They ran TO home. Laura heard some noise and Susan started to panic. Mother took girls to the basement. Suddenly, something crashed. Susan started to cry and panic again. After some (? nie wiem czy same jest tu odpowiednie) time everything stoppped AND they came back home. The house had damaged windows. Trees and cars were destroyed. The neighbour lost his dog. Fortunately girls found him in the bushes. All in all everything has ended luckily. pozdro ;)