Prosze o sprawdzenie.
miałam napisać opowiadanie czasach przeszłych spimle i continoues.

Long, long ago in a dark forest lived a beatiful girl named Iza. Her husband, kamil was woodcutter. One day had to go deep for the wood on winter. While Kamil was gathering , Iza was alone at home. She was afraid. First evening when Iza read the book, heard strange knocking on the window. Iza quick broke up. At the beginning thought with the wind but it was something else. She came up to the window to see what it is. When looked that they saw someone running aut in the forest. Iza didn't sleep all night, thought it was something come back. Morning came before the hause and saw trances of people . You have received a night . Iza again read the book. Suddenly someone knocked to door. Iza came up the door and asked :Who is it?. but no answered, only futher knocking. Iza didn't knowing what to do. Decided that the repeal of door and who see it. Slowly opened the door but nobody was. it was very strange. Again the next night someone knocked to door. Iza quicly got up aut of bed took a knife to attack a person who knocks. ran to open the door .Quickly opened the door and saw the attacka took kamil. She was killed him.

Nie jestem najlepsza z anglika więc prosze o poprawe wszelkich błędów. Z góry dziękuje ;**

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2010-01-02T16:26:33+01:00
Long, long time ago in a dark forest lived a beatiful girl named Iza. Her husband, kamil was woodcutter. One day he went for the wood on winter. While Kamil was gathering , Iza was alone at home. She was afraid that there might happen something bad. First evening when Iza read the book, she heard strange knocking on the window. Iza quick broke up. At the beginning she thought that it was because of the wind but it was something else. She came up to the window to see what it is. She saw someone running out in the forest. Iza didn't sleep all night, thought it was something come back. At the morning came before the house and saw trances of people . You have received a night . Iza again read the book. Suddenly someone knocked to door. Iza came up the door and asked :Who is it?. but nobody answered, only futher knocking. Iza didn't know what to do. She decided to repeal the door and see who is it. Iza opened the door slowly but nobody was there. It was very strange. The next night someone knocked to door again. Iza quicly got up out of bed, took a knife to attack a person who knocks. She ran to open the door.Iza did it quickly and attacked kamil. She killed him.




Myślę że tak jest lepiej.
2010-01-02T17:12:21+01:00
Long, long ago in a dark forest lived a beatiful girl named Iza. Her husband, kamil was woodcutter. One day he had to go deep for the wood on winter. While Kamil was gathering , Iza was alone at home. She was afraid. First evening when Iza read the book, she heard strange knocking on the window. Iza quickly broke up. At the beginning she thought that it was just wind but it was something else. She came up to the window to see what it is. When she looked, she saw someone running out of the forest. Iza didn't sleep all night,she thought that something will come back. In the morning she came in front of the hause and saw trances of people . You have received a night . Iza again read the book. Suddenly someone knocked to door. Iza came up the door and asked :Who is it?. but no one answered, only futher knocking. Iza didn't know what to do. She decided that the repeal of door and who see it. She slowly opened the door but nobody was there.It was very strange. Again the next night someone knocked to door. Iza quicly got up out of bed and took a knife to attack a person who knocks.She ran to open the door .She quickly opened the door and killed kamil.