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In these holidays I went Of Ireland, I was there altogether the week with my friends. We spent accommodation in the hotel.there was a nice day and quite warmly. so we went to the sea to rocks. Suddenly it started strongly blowing, there was a storm.
Then as soon as possible we escaped to the hotel so that we were safe. When it was after everything, we left the hotel, there was much rubbish in the street and of branches broken up.of people there living searched for their things and each other.Long I will remember this day, fortunately consecutive days of holidays didn't bring such emotions.

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2009-09-20T22:13:31+02:00
In these holidays I BEEN Of Ireland, I was there altogether the week with my friends. We spent accommodation in the hotel. there was a nice day and quite warmly, so we went to the sea to rocks. Suddenly it started strongly blowing, there was a storm.
Then as soon as possible we escaped to the hotel so that we were safe. When it was after everything, we left the hotel, there was much rubbish in the street and of branches broken up.of people there living searched for their things and each other.Long I will remember this day, fortunately consecutive days of holidays didn't bring such emotions.