Prosze o poprawienie błędów (o ile są,tylko poprawnie) w poniższym opisie wakacji. To ma byc w czasie PAST SIMPLE (czy to jest dobrze)??

I spend my last holidays in Italy. It was the best summer in all my life. I went to this country by aeroplane with my family. I was living in a hotel. The weather was sunny and hot. Most of our time we have spend on the beatch but of course not all the time.Usually after breakfast I was swimming in the sea with my sisters. We were visit as much interesting and beautiful places. We went Neapol. Old and very beautiful town. I went to home after two amazing weeks in Italy. Last weeks holidays I spend in home. Sometimes I visit my friends. This holidays it was relly great. ! :)

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2009-09-20T13:56:12+02:00
I spend my last holidays in Italy. It was the best summer in all my life. I went to this country by aeroplane with my family. I was living in a hotel. The weather was sunny and hot. Most of our time we have spend on the beach but of course not all the time.Usually after breakfast I was swimming in the sea with my sisters. We were visit as much interesting and beautiful places. We went to Neapol, which is Old and very beautiful town. I went to home after two amazing weeks in Italy. Last weeks of holidays I spend at home. Sometimes I met with my friends.
Those holidays was relly great. ! :)