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1.In these holidays I went Of Ireland, I was there altogether the week with my friends. We spent accommodation in the hotel.there was a nice day and quite warmly. so we went to the sea to rocks. Suddenly it started strongly blowing, there was a storm.
Then as soon as possible we escaped to the hotel so that we were safe. When it was after everything, we left the hotel, there was much rubbish in the street and of branches broken up.of people there living searched for their things and each other.Long I will remember this day, fortunately consecutive days of holidays didn't bring such emotions.

2.During these holidays I went to Ireland, I spent there a week with my friends.We lived in the hotel.The days were warm andvquite warm, so we went to the sea. Suddenly it started blowing strongly, and there was a storm.
Then as soon as possible we ran to the hotel and we were safe. When after everything, we left the hotel, there was much rubbish in the street and broken branches.People living there searched for their things and each other.I will remember this day really long.

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2009-09-21T18:25:08+02:00
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In these holiday I went to Ireland. I was there with my friends. We stayed in the hotel.there was a nice day. so we went to the sea to rocks. Suddenly it started strongly blowing, there was a storm.
Then as soon as possible we escaped to the hotel so that we were safe. When it was after everything, we left the hotel, there was much rubbish in the street and of branches broken up.I will remember this day, next days of holidays was peaceful/