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Me and my group at 10 August 2008 year leaved the trip to the Arctic. Ours objective were Coast Adel. Ours expedition started for landed plane in the centre of Arctic. We prepared sled and started. Ours adventure were two weeks. I must prepared dogs to vimperf. My best thing about the trip is day when we arranged a caraoce. Everyone funned excellent. My worst thing about the trip is day when sparked snowstorm.
I was never forgotten this amazing trip.

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2010-01-10T13:38:29+01:00
Leaved -> left
ours-> our
4 linijka is -> was /there was
5 linijka is -> was
forgotten -> nie wiem jak to zamienić, tak ogólnie całe zdanie mi nie pasuje, powinno byc wg mnie w innym czasie
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2010-01-10T13:45:18+01:00
At 10 August 2008 year my group and I left to the trip to the trip Arctic.
Ours object was Coast Adel. Ours expedition started for landed plane in the center of arctic. We prepared sled and started. This adventure was two weeks. I must prepared dogs to vimperf. My best thing about this trip was day when we arranged a caraocoe. Everyone funned excellent. My worst thing was day when sparked snowstorm.
I was never forgotten this amazing trip.