Deaar Mrs Jack and Ms Anne,
I am penfriend from your daughter Roxane. My name is Ewa. I am 16 years old and I staying in Wayomuth, because I am studying English here. I think, it is greate time to meet with my penfriend and your daughter-Roxane.
My landlady,Carmen,has given me tickets to a show at the local theatre.I would like that Roxane come with me to this show.What you think about that?
Name of this show that “Fame”-it is a musical. I have tickets to Friday evening at 6 pm. In my opinion Roxane can catch train at 4 pm and we can meet outside the station at 5.15.
Back train we have at 10.15.After the show, but before train I and Roxane can eat chip supper or pizzas. I think so we expected home after 11.I hope that isn’t too late,because it is holiday time. In my opinion this show will great, so I hope your answer to my request will positive.

Your sincerely,
Cathrina


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2010-01-11T19:31:17+01:00
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DEAR Mrs Jack and Ms Anne,
I am penfriend from your daughter Roxane. My name is Ewa. I am 16 years old and I staying in Wayomuth, because I am studying English here. I think, it is GREAT time to meet with my penfriend and your daughter-Roxane.
My landlady,Carmen,has given me tickets to a show at the local theatre.I would like that Roxane come with me to this show.What you think about that?
Name of this show that “Fame”-it is a musical. I have tickets to Friday evening at 6 pm. In my opinion Roxane can catch train at 4 pm and we can meet outside the station at 5.15.
Back train we have at 10.15.After the show, but before train I and Roxane can eat chip supper or pizzas. I think so we expected home after 11.I hope that isn’t too late,because it is holiday time. In my opinion this show will great, so I hope your answer to my request will positive.

Your sincerely,
Cathrina

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