Moglibyście sprawdzić czy nie mam jakiś błędów np brakuje a,lub jakich takich innych duperelek
to dla mnie ważne bo musze mieć dobrą ocene na koniec semestru
In the picture I can see mother and son.In the background is father. He is decorating the Cristmas tree. Mother and son are happy. They are smelling and eating cookies. Everyone is at home.

In the picture I can see 6 students and a teacher. They are in classroom. They are talking.They thinking.In the picture I can see cabinets,desks and chairs. They are having uniforms

In the picture I can see a boy and a girl. The boy is smaller than the girl. They are having uniforms. They are doing sandwitches.

People usually spend New Year's Eve at home with family or friends. Flors often go to the cinema or restaurant for a party under the sky. Wealthy people po on foreign trips to welcome the new year outsite the country. About 12 hours greets the New Year.Everyone are opening the champange and there is a fireworks display. In the day of the new year people are going to the church and they want to spend this day together in the family circle. 1 January is the day off work so families have more time to deal with eatch other

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2010-01-11T19:19:26+01:00
In the picture I can see mother and son. Father is in the background. He is decorating the Cristmas tree. Mother and son are happy. They are smilling and eating cookies. Everyone is at home.

In the picture I can see 6 students and a teacher. They are in the classroom, they have uniforms. They are talking. In the classroom I can see cabinets, desks and chairs.

In the picture I can see a boy and a girl. The boy is smaller than the girl. They are in uniforms. They are doing sandwiches. (Jeśli oni jedzą, to zamiast 'doing' powinno być 'eating', a jeśli szykują, to 'making'.)

People usually spend New Year's Eve at home with family or friends. Many of them often go to the cinema or restaurant for a party under the sky. Wealthy people go on foreign trips to welcome the new year outsite the country. About 12 am everybody greets the New Year. Everyone are opening the champange and there is a fireworks display. In the day of the new year people are going to the church and they want to spend this day together in the family circle. 1 January is the day off work so families have more time to deal with each other.
2010-01-11T19:25:40+01:00
Christmas tree a nie Cristmas tree.
W drugim paragrafie wydaje mi sie niepotrzebne They thinking.. Jesli bys chciala to napisac to jak cos They ARE thinking.