Muszę poprawić zadanie domowe z którego dostałam 3. To jest tekst z którego dostałam tą ocenę: In the future I want be a journalist. This is very interesting work. If I wants be a journalist first I must end a journalism school. Journalist talk with famous people and knows many interesing people. Journalist rides around the world and he can visit many country, knows culture and manners in this country. Journalist must be a good writer. He must write different articles. I think I am be a good writer and I like write. I want be a music and gossip journalis, because I very interested a music and a showbusiness star life. Journalist must speak other languages to talks with people from another country. I learn a english language and I think this is very helpful in my future work - journalist. Błędy jakie podkreśliła mi nauczycielka to I am be, another, english language. Czy moglibyście mi je poprawić i dopisać z 2-3 zdania do tego? bardzo pilne!