Muszę poprawić zadanie domowe z którego dostałam 3. To jest tekst z którego dostałam tą ocenę: In the future I want be a journalist. This is very interesting work. If I wants be a journalist first I must end a journalism school. Journalist talk with famous people and knows many interesing people. Journalist rides around the world and he can visit many country, knows culture and manners in this country. Journalist must be a good writer. He must write different articles. I think I am be a good writer and I like write. I want be a music and gossip journalis, because I very interested a music and a showbusiness star life. Journalist must speak other languages to talks with people from another country. I learn a english language and I think this is very helpful in my future work - journalist. Błędy jakie podkreśliła mi nauczycielka to I am be, another, english language. Czy moglibyście mi je poprawić i dopisać z 2-3 zdania do tego? bardzo pilne!

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2010-01-26T17:22:46+01:00
In the future I want be a journalist. This is very interesting work. If I want be a journalist first I must end a journalism school. Journalist talks with famous people and knows many interesting people. Journalist rides around the world and he can visit many countries, knows culture and manners of this country. Journalist must be a good writer. He must write different articles. I think I will be a good writer because I like writing. I want be a music and gossip journalist, because I am very interested in music and stars lifes. Journalist must speak in other languages to talk with people from another country. I am learning a English language and I think this is very helpful in my future work - journalist. Journalist can work in TV or in newspaper, so I have 2 possibility of work. It's very interessting job. I think someday I will be a great journalist.