Chciałam żeby ktoś mi sprawdził czy mam dobrze napisaną historyjkę o psie,czy nie pomieszałam czasów,czy mam je dobrze itp.z góry dziękuje i proszę o poprawna odpowiedź:)

Once,a hungry dog called George stole a bone from a butcher's shop.The angry butcher he started chasing the dog.George was escape how much power paws.George was carring the bone in his mouth when he come to a river.Someone bulit a wooden bridge across the river.George wanted across the bridge.As George was crossing the bridge he looking down.He saw another dog in the water and it carring a bone.The George scared and he dropped the bone.George wanted the other bone,too.He dropped his bone and tried to get the other dog's bone.Of course,George's bone fell into the water and disappeared.The result?He not having and he was hungry for the rest of the day.Fortunately it was dream.

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2009-10-03T18:31:48+02:00