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Moim ulubionym sportem jest siatkówka, ponieważ można się swietnie bawić jak i troche po rywalizować.
Siatkowka to stara dyscyplina sportowa w ktorej udzial biora dwie druzyny liczace po 6 zawodnikow. W gre ta moga grac kobiety i mezczyzn. Gra trwa do trzech wygranych setow, druzyna aby wygrac w secie musi zdobyc 25 punktow ale jednoczesnie musi byc dwu punktowa przewaga nad przeciwnikiem. Boisko do gry dzieli siatka na dwie rowne czesci, w sklad druzyny wchodza kapitam i libero.
Uważam, że gra w siatkówkę nie polega tylko na wygrywaniu ale na zdobyciu jakiegoś doświetczenia .




My favourite sport is volleyball becouse it is possible oneself great to entertain as well as after to compete between oneself
Volleyball tries it discipline sport witch involves the two teams consisting from six sportsmen. Can play this game women and men.Game lates up for three won sets,the team that won at win in set must get 25 pionts but must be two-point lead over opponet.Sports field divides for game on equal two net parts.The squad They enter to composition of team capitain and libero.
I think that the game of the volleyball doesn't consist only on winning but on acquiring some experience.

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2010-01-27T16:43:49+01:00
My favourite sport is volleyball becouse it is possible oneself great to entertain as well as after to compete between oneself
Volleyball tries it discipline sport witch involves the two teams consisting from six sportsmen. Can play this game women and men.Game lates up for three won sets,the team that won at win in set must get 25 points but must be two-point lead over opponet.Sports field divides for game on equal two net parts.The squad They enter to composition of team capitain and libero.
I think that the game of the volleyball doesn't consist only on winning but on acquiring some experience.

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