Co można dopisać to tego opowiadania ? Jest trochę za krótkie, pomocy ! Nic mi nie przychodzi do głowy .
One week ago I was having a walk with my dog. Before a walk I was watching a really ghosty movie. I was near the park, when I felt a weird cold. Lamps started to nicate and then I saw someone on the street. He had a knife. I wanted to call on help, I ran away. Two days later I saw a dead child and his parents on the street. It was a really terrible evening.

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2010-01-28T11:27:55+01:00
Po pierwsze to masz dużo błędów tutaj. Nie moze byc one week ago i was having a walk with my dog. nie mozna tego napisac w czasie past continuous, bo jest to czas przeszły niedokonany czyli tak jakbys bo dzis dzien chodzil z tym psem. Musisz to napisac w past simple bo jest to czas dokonany. tak samo kolejne zdanie... nie was watching tylko watched.