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It rained whe we have arrived at the coast but by midday it had been stopping. We thought the rain lasted all day and we have been very glad it hadnt because we were wanting to go swimming. We found a cafe where we could eat outside and were having a nice meal. By the time we had finished lunch the sun shone brightly and the temperature rose to 30 degrees. We were all running down to the beach and, after we were changing into our swimming things, we dived in the sea.

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2009-10-05T22:26:28+02:00
It rained whe we have arrived at the coast but by midday it had been stopping. We thought the rain lasted all day and we have been very glad it hadnt because we were wanting to go swimming. We found a cafe where we could eat outside and were having a nice meal. By the time we had finished lunch the sun shone brightly and the temperature rose to 30 degrees. We were all running down to the beach and, after we were changing into our swimming things, we dived in the sea.

It was raining when we have arrived at the coast but by the midday it stopped. We thought the rain will last all day and we were very glad it didn't because we wanted to go swimming. We found a cafe where we could eat outside and have a nice meal. By the time we had finished lunch the sun was shining brightly and the temperature have risen to 30 degrees. We have all run down to the beach and after we have changed into our swimming things we dived into the sea.
2009-10-05T22:35:55+02:00
It was raining when we have arrived at the coast but by the midday it stopped. We thought the rain will last all day and we were very glad it didn't because we wanted to go swimming. We found a cafe where we could eat outside and have a nice meal. By the time we had finished lunch the sun was shining brightly and the temperature have risen to 30 degrees. We have all run down to the beach and after we have changed into our swimming things we dived into the sea.