What is one of the best days of your life.
Last week a visited my friend, Patrycja in home and she told me what had happened at school when there was no me. I lerent of many intresing things.
Then we went to the shoping and cinema. We played great! in the park we met Iza and with her we come back to out home. It was a cool day. Prosze sprawdź czy dobrze jak nie to popraw proszę.

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2010-02-07T15:15:15+01:00
Last week a visited my friend Patrycja. She told me that had happened at school when i was absent.I learnt many of interesing things wiht her.She told me how to do chemical experiment!
Than we went to the shops and cinema together. We enjoyed this evening very much! After that we met Iza in the park and with her we come back to out home. It was a cool day
2010-02-07T15:15:37+01:00
Źle jest słówko "lerent" i "intresing", reszta powinna być już poprawnie:) w niektórych miejscach brakuje przecinków, ale myślę, że to nie jest taki poważny błąd żeby ktoś się Ciebie o to czepiał ;)
2010-02-07T19:59:59+01:00
Last week i visited my friend,Patrycja. She told me what was in school when i was absent . I learnt many interesting and new things . Then we went to the shopping. After shopping we went to the cinema .That time was great , we enjoyed it. When we were going back to home we met Iza in the park and she came back with us to our home. It was fantastic day.