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Dear David,
How are you? I hope you're very well.

At the last time I was very busy, because I'm reading an interesting book: „Harry Potter”. I write to you about that, because I think that you'll be happy when you can read it.

In „Harry Potter” are three main heroes. One of them – Harry – is typical teenager. And he has two friends – Ron and Hermione. They have a lot of adventures, but not in real world. This friends live in a magic place. Harry, Ron and Hermione are learning there, but they have a second mission. They must beat an enemy, who want to govern all their world.

I like this book, because it tells me about world, whose I never know. This magic is really beautiful. I like the style of book, because it's very great written. An autor must got a great talent.

I recommend you to read „Harry Potter”, too. I think that you'll be like it very much. And you could write to me about about this book, when you finished reading.
I'm waiting for the letter.

Lots of love,

XYZ

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2010-02-11T23:40:59+01:00
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Dear David,
How are you? I hope you're very well.

Last time I was very busy, beacuse I'm reading interesting book: „Harry Potter”. I'm writing to you, because I think that you will be happy when you read it.

In „Harry Potter” are three main heroes. One of them – Harry – is a typical teenager, he has got two friends – Ron and Hermione. They've got a lot of adventures, but it doesn't happened in real world. These friends live in a magic place. Harry, Ron and Hermione learn there, but they've got a second mission. They must beat an enemy, who want to govern all their world.

I like this book, beacuse it tells me about world, which I have never known. This magic is really beautiful. I like style of this book, bacuse it was written very good. Author have got a big talent.

I recommend you to read „Harry Potter”. I think that you will like it very much, and you could write to me what you are thinking about this book, when you finish.
I'm waiting for your letter.

Lots of love,
XYZ


troszkę błędów znalazłam ;)... i poprawiłam, żeby składnia była ok i żeby pasowało;P... czasy troszkę też się nie zgadzały ;)
pozdrawiam;)