One day when I was staying in the queque in the bank
I saw man next to me holding a gun and shooting at the lady inside. He was tall and he had black hat on his head. His gun was not so big it was gun as you see usually in TV movies. After he asked the receptionist to give him all the money, he told all people inside no to scream and to sit down. Other one of the robbers closed the door and switched the sign from ,, open " to ,, closed ". While the lady was giving him money, other employee pressed red, alarm button under his desk. It was so sudden when police came. There was like 3 big usual cars, and few mans in civvies outfit. They went out and went behing the building to enter from back door. When 10 policemen entered the room 2 robbers were shocked, one of them shooted on the policeman, but other one just dropped his gun on the floor. After all we went to the police office to say what we saw and I asked about that injured policeman, they said he is ok, it was shoot just in his leg.

Proszę o sprawdzenie tekstu ewentualne poprawki(cos dopisac), tematem jest napad na bank, bardzo proszę o pomoc, jesli mozna prosil bym rowniez o przetlumaczenie tekstu na polski dziekuje z gury bede wdzieczny

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2009-10-13T16:24:48+02:00
One day when I stayed in the bank I saw, how the man by me had firearms and he is shooting at you in of means. He was high and he had the black hat on his head. His firearms weren't big, but so you can usually see which in television films. After how he asked the receptionist she would give him entire money, he ordered everyone for people inside not to scream and to sit down. The other thief closed the door and he exchanged the inscription around open to closed. While for you she gave him money, other employee pressed red, button under his desk. It was like this sudden when police arrived. There were 3 big police vans there. They went to enter back for me with door of the building. When 10 policemen accessed thieves into room 2 was shaken, one of them shot at the policeman, and the one second just planted his firearms on him on the floor. Then we went to say to the police office what we saw and we asked about this hurt policeman, they said he was doing well, then a wound in his leg was small.
Tak powinno być, a to jest cały tekst po polsku:
Pewnego dnia gdy zostałem w banku gdzie zobaczyłem, jak człowiek koło mnie miał broń palną i on strzelał do pani w środku. Był wysoki i miał czarny kapelusz na swojej głowie. Jego broń palna nie była duża, ale zazwyczaj możesz widzieć ją w filmach telewizyjnych. Potem jak zapytał recepcjonistkę, która dała mu całe pieniądze, rozkazał każdemu czlowiekowi w środku nie krzyczeć i usiąść. Inny złodziej zamknął drzwi i wymienił napis z otwarty na zamknięty.
Podczas gdy pani dawała mu pieniądze, inny pracownik nacisnął czerwony guzik pod jego biurkiem. To było tak nagłe kiedy policja przyjechała. Tam były 3 duże samochody policyjne. Poszli wejść tylnimi drzwiami do budynku. Gdy 10 policjantów weszło do środka 2 złodziejów było wstrząśniętych, jeden z nich strzelał do policjanta bo ten drugi właśnie podrzucił mu swoją broń palną po podłodze. Potem poszliśmy do biura policyjnego powiedzieć co zobaczyliśmy i zapytaliśmy o tego zranionego policjanta, powiedzieli, że on ma się dobrze, to była mała rana w jego nodze.
Myślę, że mniej wiecej tak:)
Pozdrawiam;)