Mógłby mi ktoś sprawdzić poprawność gramatyczną tego tekstu??
Napewno sa gdzieś jakies błędy stylisteczne lub cos.


My dream is work as a computer science. I like this kind of work and and is very profitable.
I like to design pages, programs and etc. and it gives me great pleasure. After too this job is very profitable. My biggest dream is also become very good in this and be famous like a Bill Gates.
i hope that I will succeed.

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2010-02-22T20:31:48+01:00
I like this kind of work becouse it is very profitable. (tak lepiej )
I like to design pages, programs and etc. cause it gives me great pleasure.
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