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„Streetball City”

Open-air party nn the park

My ideal party in the park are play basketball combined with rap concert. The whole event will begin 22nd July (Saturday). On First day will be Qualification basketball and concert stars such as 50 Cent and Eminem. This will be matches Wild Team. Sreetball is modification original basketball consisting of almost no rules with emphasis at tricks. I will participate obviously in the tournament too. On second day will be more concert and final streetball. That day go on the boards a stars among others Snoop Dogg, Jay – Z and P. Diddy. The whole event will be in the park in Węgliniec while baskets for the game will stand in the parking lot and tartan. Victorious tournament will could go backstage to the V.I.P. lounge to meet the stars. There are waiting for our many attractions.

Plan a Party:

Saturday
8.00 - Official opening
10.00 - Start of the tournament
12.00 – Show the best tricks with ball
15.00 - Snnouncement of results
16.00 – Concert Eminem
19.00 – Concert 50 Cent
22.00 - Party until dawn with techno music

Sunday
10:00 – Final Streetball
13.00 – Concert Snoop Dogg
15.00 – Concert Jay – Z
18.00 – Cabaret “Ani Mru Mru”
20:00 – Concert P. Diddy
22:00 – Fireworks and end Party

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Street ball City

Open-air party in the park

My ideal party in the park would be playing basketball accompanied by a rap concert. The whole event would begin on 22 July (Saturday). During the first day there would be a basketball competition and during the concert such stars as 50 Cent and Eminem would perform. Street ball is a modified version of original basketball. There are almost no rules and the main emphasis is on tricks. I would obviously participate in the tournament too.
On second day there would be more concerts and streetball finals. That day Snoop Dogg, Jay – Z and P. Diddy would perform on stage. The whole event would take place in the park in Węgliniec while basketball games would be held on parking lot and on a playing field covered with Tartan. Winners of the tournament could go backstage to the V.I.P. lounge to meet the stars. There would be many attractions waiting for them.

P.S. Wyciełam fragment na temat Wild Team, gdyż nie mogłam do końca domyslić sie o co chodzi, jesli chodzilo Ci o to że ta drużyna będzie grać mecze to zdanie może wygladać tak:
The Wild Team would play their matches.

Event schedule:

Saturday
8.00 - Official opening
10.00 - Start of the tournament
12.00 – Show of the best tricks with ball
15.00 - Results announcing
16.00 – Eminem concert
19.00 – 50 Cent concert
22.00 - Party until dawn with techno music

Sunday
10:00 – Streetball finals
13.00 – Snoop Dogg concert
15.00 – Jay – Z concert
18.00 – “Ani Mru Mru” cabaret
20:00 – P. Diddy concert
22:00 – Fireworks and Party ending

Come and join useverybody's invited
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