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Last Saturday night I heard Fifi - I mean, my dog - she was barking. So I went downstairs but she wasn't there! Her and my jewels. My jewellry box was on the floor and it was empty! I called the police.
My jewels are very beautiful and pretty expensive. They are worth a million dollars. And Fifi is my beloved pet.
Chief Inspector Bilton was investigating the crimes. Four people were staying at my house last weekend, and he was questioning them WSZYSTKO.
The thief was... Mr Anderson! How could he do it?! He gave Fifi my jewels to eat. Now - thank God - I gave Fifi and my jewels back.

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2010-03-01T18:15:45+01:00
Last Saturday night I heard Fifi - I mean, my dog - she was barking. So I went downstairs but she wasn't there! Her and my jewels. My jewellery`s box was on the floor and it was empty! I called the police.
My jewels are very beautiful and pretty expensive. They are worth a million dollars. And Fifi is my beloved pet.
Chief Inspector Bilton was investigating the crimes. Four people were staying at my house last weekend, and he was questioning them everything.
The thief was... Mr Anderson! How could he do it?! He gave Fifi my jewels to eat. Now - thank God - I gave Fifi and my jewels back.

Bardzo dobra praca moim zdaniem! ;d congratulations :)