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The horrible disaster in Haiti
The Republic of Haiti is a little country in middle America located near Dominican Republic. Haiti is and was one of the poorest country in the world. There lived about 9 million people, but now, after the earthquake things change.
12 January 2010 at 16:53 local time Haitians felt first huge earth tremor and in this moment started nightmare. Aftershock lasted few days and was very dangerous too. The earthquake had 7 Mw. This disaster touched about 3 million people, 230 thousand Haitians died, rest became homeless or hurt. Most of the buildings near Port-au-Prince became destroyed. People, who survived, need help, mainly drinking water, food and medicaments. They don’t need money, because all shops, hotels and even chemist’s collapsed. Now whole world helps Haiti. Presidents of different countries promised help for Haiti. But not only they give Haitians a helping hand. Red Cross, Unicef and Caritas support this country after earthquake. Many celebrities show a remarkable commitment in this things. It’s amazing how whole world unite for Haiti.

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