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Jessica and Adam met five years ago. She was working at London. One day she saw him. He was a university student, but was doing a summer job. He had come to the place where she was working.

As Adam was leaving, he left a little message next to Jessica's computer. Jessica phoned him and they met the same evening. Adam and Jessica liked each other a lot. One day a terrible thing happened. Jessica was hit by a car. She was badly hurt. Six months later Jessica was OK again. Adam had helped her a lot.

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2010-03-08T17:30:45+01:00
Jessica and Adam met when they have five years ago. She was working at London. One day she saw him. While He was a university student, but was doing a summer job. He had come to the place where she was working.
As Adam was leaving, he left a little message next to Jessica's computer. While Jessica phoned him and they met the same evening. Adam & Jessica like each other a lot. While one day a terrible thing happened. Jessica was hit by car. She was badly hurt.While Six months later Jessica was OK again.Adam had helped her a lot