Prosze powiedzcie mi czy to zadanie przejdzie w opisie miasta na chociaż 4 ,jeśli nie proszę o wprowadzenie poprawek.
My dreams Town
My dreams town is so in which there are lots of the shops.Between the shop and the church there is the hospital. Opposite the sport centre there is a swimming pool. Supermarket there is next to the park.
Proszę o szybkie odpowiedzi i szczegółowe recenzje na temat opisu :)

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2010-03-08T19:59:57+01:00
Opposite the sport centre there is a swimming pool.
bez there
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na 4 albo 5 powinno byc, zalezy od nauczyciela.

Ale masz tu odemnie mam 5+ z ang na półrocze ;p

In my dream town is a lot of shops. Between them and the church is a hospital. Opposite the sports center is a swimming pool. Supermarket is next to the park.
Post office is near my home, and police station is behind the post office

dodałem od siebie, myślę, że to da 5 a jak nie to 4 na 100%