Na podstawie dwóch tekstów, Pani kazała napisać wypracowanie o mojej szkole, o ulubionych przedmiotach itd.
Napisałam już, ale bardzo prosiłabym o sprawdzenie. Pani jest bardzo wymagająca... Potrzebne na jutro. Proszę o DOKŁADNE sprawdzenie.
Z góry dziękuję!
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I attend a secondary school. Unfortunately I live far from my school, so I have to get up early. In my class are twenty three students: 11 girls and 12 boys. The boys usually tell that they are better, because there are more boys in class. They behave like a children... But I think it`s normall in (on?) this (that?) age.
However I like my school. Some subject rooms are small and I don`t like them, but some classrooms are big and light, for example: rooms for biology, polish, chemistry, physics etc.
Teachers are OK. We have great form master.
Outside there is very big sport field, which was renewed a few months ago. Now it`s great!
The school building is old. They try to modernise it, but I think it didn`t work.
I don`t like a cloakroom. When we want to take our jacket ot something else, we have to stay in a big queue. I think the best solution will be lockers like in an America. I saw it in some films and I really liked it, but it`s imposiible dream. What a shame...
My favourite school subjects are chemistry, polish, english and math. When I was in primary school everyone has (have?) told me that I have talent to human subjects, but now it`s different.
I`m going to a high school soon, but I havo no idea what I want to do in future! There are a lot of reflexions in my imagination. Everyone from my class know what they want to do when they will by adult. It`s very hard decision.
On the other hand I have a lot of time to think about that...

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2010-03-09T19:56:50+01:00
Moim zdaniem wszystko jest ok. Jak dla mnie to praca jest super, napewno dostaniesz piątkę
2010-03-09T19:59:20+01:00
But I think it`s normall in (on?) this (that?) age. to będzie tak:
But I think it`s normall at this age.
When I was in primary school everyone has (have?) told me that I have talent to human subjects, but now it`s different.
Będzie tak jak masz!
Myślę, że reszta jedt okej. Pozdrawiam!