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Dear Tom

I am having a great time here in New York. I am staying in a post office near the Central Park with my friend Klaudia.
So far we have been to Manhattan and I have done shopping on 5th Avenue. Unfortunately I lost my camera when We was doing shopping. We haven’t visited Liberty Island yet. Tomorrow We will go and see a concert in Carnegie Hall.
We will come back home next Monday. I hope you was O.K.

See you Bill


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2010-03-10T18:28:13+01:00
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Dear Tom
I am having a grat time here in New York.I stay in a post office near the Central Park with my friend Klaudia.I lost my camera while we were shopping.We haven't visited Liberty Island yet.Tomorrow We will go and see a concert in Carnegie Hall.We are going to come back next Monday.I hope you were O.K.

See you Bill