Bardzo proszę o poprawienie błędów w tym wypracowaniu. wiem że jest ich sporo ale proszę o szybką odpowiedź. a oto ono:
The nighy was cold. I and my little siste were the home. We were wathing scary film in my room.
Suddenlly, the lights went out. I heard voice. I walked to the window and I saw a figure. I scared and started to scream. My sister ran to wake our dad, whileI went turn on TV. My sister and my dad went to me. While we were watching TV someone knocked on the door. When my dad opened the door, nobody was there.
I was scared when I went to sleep. I wake up at 9:00 and I was thinking it was a dream.