Bardzo proszę o poprawienie błędów w tym wypracowaniu. wiem że jest ich sporo ale proszę o szybką odpowiedź. a oto ono:

The nighy was cold. I and my little siste were the home. We were wathing scary film in my room.
Suddenlly, the lights went out. I heard voice. I walked to the window and I saw a figure. I scared and started to scream. My sister ran to wake our dad, whileI went turn on TV. My sister and my dad went to me. While we were watching TV someone knocked on the door. When my dad opened the door, nobody was there.
I was scared when I went to sleep. I wake up at 9:00 and I was thinking it was a dream.

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2010-03-11T17:56:24+01:00

The nigh was cold. I and my little siste were in the home. We were watching scary film in my room.
Suddenly, the lights went out. I heard a voice. I walked to the window and I saw a figure. I scared and started to scream. My sister was running to wake our dad, while were turning on TV. My sister and my dad went to me. While we were watching TV someone knocked on the door. When my dad opened the door, nobody was there.
I was scared when I went to sleep. I woke up at 9:00 and I was thinking it was a dream.
2010-03-11T17:57:44+01:00
The night was cold. I and my little sister were at home. We were watching a scary film in my room.
Suddenly, the lights went out. I heard a voice. I walked to the window and I saw a figure. I was scared and I started to scream. My sister ran to wake our dad, while I went to turn on TV. My sister and my dad came to me. While we were watching TV someone knocked on the door. When my dad opened the door, nobody was there.
I was scared when I went to sleep. I woke up at 9:00 and I was thinking it was a dream.
2010-03-11T18:12:22+01:00
When it was cold. Me and my sister were at home. Watching scary movie in my room. Suddenly, the lights went out. I heard the voice of. I went to the window and saw a figure. I began to fear. My sister ran to our father when he went off TV. My sister and father came to me. Suddenly someone knocked at the door, and when my father opened nobody was there.
I was afraid when I went to sleep. I woke up at 9:00, it turned out that it was only a dream.