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Dear John,
How are you? I hope you are very well. I have got so much to tell you that I do not know how to begin.

I came of language camp in London. I saw many monuments. I was in Tower of London. Tower of London is interesting monument in London. It was the seat of rulers of England. I was in The British Museum. It is the biggest the world museum. I was also on London Eye, it is very beautiful. It was very nice. I made many things learned English language, met some friends in town and watched films. I went to a rock concert. I went shopping. In the last evening we had bonfire farewell on garden. We laughed, listened to music and sang. We ate sausages and drank. On language camp I mored cool person. She name is Melissa. She fromed Spain. She was tall and slim. She had long, blond hair and green eye. She liked sport and foreign languages. She was nice. I liked spoke with her.
I have to finish now. Hope to hear from you. Give my regards to your parents.

Your sincere friend,
Asia

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2010-03-13T23:43:16+01:00
Pare porpawek, ale juz dobrze ;))

Dear John,
How are you? I hope you are very well. I have got so much to tell you that I do not know how to begin.

I came of language camp in London. I saw many monuments. I was in Tower of I came of language camp in London. I saw many monuments. I was in Tower of London. Tower of London is interesting monument in London. It was the seat of rulers of England. I was in The British Museum. It is the biggest the world museum. I was also on London Eye, it is very beautiful. It was very nice. I made many things learned English language, met some friends in town and watched films. I went to a rock concert. I went shopping. In the last evening we had bonfire farewell on garden. We laughed, listened to music and sang. We ate sausages and drank. On language camp I mored cool person. She name is Melissa. She fromed Spain. She was tall and slim. She had long, blond hair and green eye. She liked sport and foreign languages. She was nice. I liked spoke with her.
I have to finish now. Hope you to hear from. My give regards to your parents.

Your sincere friend,
Asia



mam taką nadzieje, ale chyba juz dobrze ;D
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2010-03-14T00:01:45+01:00
Dear John,
How are you? (nie zaczynamy w ten sposób listów). I hope you are very well. I have got so much to tell you, that I do not know how to begin .

I <came> WENT <of> to <language camp(?)> ON A LANGUAGE COURSE <in> TO London.

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