Witam, potrzebuje korekty w krótkim wypracowaniu z j. angielskiego, ponieważ jestem po dłuższej nieobecności i nie umiem dobrze stosować czasów past simple i past continuous, i zapewne popełniłem dużo błędów. Praca ma dotyczyć jakiejś katastrofy, którą przeżyłem w przeszłości (zmyśloną). Jeśli można, proszę o dopisanie kilku zdań w celu uatrakcyjnienia;] z góry dziękuję!

I will never forget what happened in the first day of 2010. Me and my friends were celebrating a comming new year. Temperature in this day was so high, and all snow were melting. All night was raining. When I woke up, and I open the doors to let my dog outdoor, mass of water entered into my house. I rang to my mother to ask, if nothing happened with her and dad, because they were in a party in my uncle's house. I woke everybody and we were cast water away my house. When we were surrendering, my friend rang for help from fire brigade. They are was comming until next day, becouse they had a lot of work these days. My home was a completly damaged. It was an terrible experience!

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2010-03-15T02:06:43+01:00
I will never forget what happened in the first day of 2010. Me and my friends were celebrating the coming new year. Temperature that day was high and all the snow was melting. It was raining all night. When I woke up and opened the doors to let my dog outdoors a mass of water entered my house. I called my mother to ask if nothing happened to her and dad, because they were at a party in my uncle's house. I woke everybody up and we were pouring the water away from my house. Just as we were beginning to surrender my friend called for help from a fire brigade. They wouldn't come until the next day, because they were having a lot of work these days. My home was badly damaged. It was a terrible experience!