Czy mógłby mi ktoś napisać historię o duchach ? Tutaj mam wzór.

One day (when?), I was in (where?). I was with (who). It was (weather?). We were (doing what?).
We were (doing what?) when, suddenly, we heard (what noise?). We went (where?) and we saw a (what ghost?) in (what clothes?). It/He/She was (doing what?).
We felt (how?) and we (did what?). Then we (did what?). In the end, we told (who?) about the ghost. They (did/didn't) believe us!

Napisałam taki początek:
"One day, last summer, I was in Niedzica castle. I was with my friends. It was a sunning day."
Dobrze ??? Niech mi ktoś dopisze koniec jeżeli to jest dobrze, a jeśli źle to prosiłabym o cała historię.
Jest mi to koniecznie potrzebne. :( Proszę pomóżcie. Z góry dziękuję.

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Najlepsza Odpowiedź!
2010-03-14T15:46:15+01:00
Last summer I visited an old castle in Kraków. I was with my best friend. It was sunny and a little bit windy. We were talking about this beautiful place.
We watched paintings when suddenly, we heard a very strange noise. We went to the next chamber and we saw a white ghost with hat on head. She was sitting on sofa and she was crying.
We felt scared and we run away. Then we turned back and asked girl why she is crying. In the end, we told our parents about the ghost. They didn't believe us!