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MTB XC
Are you bored your not interesting life? Get in bike and go to forest.
Firstly riding on the bike is very extreme and wonderful. When you riding on bike you can do everything. You can live more unforgettable adventure.
Secondly you can starting on mountain biking races. In they you can check your options. Futhermore when you „get box” (take a 1st or 2nd or 3rd posiction) you can win cool prizes.
On the other hand you must still training. In addition this sport isn't only beautyful but dangerous too! When you haven't properly adapted bike you can destroy it or cause damage your body.
All in all. I love mountain biking and I recommend it all people.

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2010-03-15T19:31:55+01:00
Are you bored of your not interesting life? Get on bike and go to forest.
At the beginning riding a bike is very extreme and wonderful. When you ride a bike you can do everything. You can live through an unforgettable adventure.
Then you can start riding on the mountain bike races. You can check your options during them. Futhermore when you get on the platform (achieve either 1st and 2nd or 3rd position) you can win cool prizes.
On the other hand you must train all the time. In addition this sport isn't only beautiful but it's dangerous as well! When you haven't properly adapted your bike you can destroy it and also damage your body.After all I love mountain biking and I recommend it to all people.


Poprawiłem błędy i tam gdzie można było coś napisać żeby "lepiej brzmiało" to też pozmieniałem :)
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