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We went sure day with all friends from my class and woman form mistress on class trip to agro - touristic farm together with to to admire exotic animals. The guide shew round us after all corners of farm. He told about his being in farm animals' and origin history.We crossed by many beautiful animals, but these the most beautiful stuck me in memory : , monkey,'s giraffe ostriches goat's, parrot and pękne, antelope's, elephants. Coloured parrots spodobały to me beautifully particularly. Martin, my colleague risked it to feed even. Guide told that they need special food. Therefore they import for them many fruit : mandarine, mango's, avocado, guava, oranges, pineapples and bananas. On end as surprise farmer organized us the fire and game of basket-ball. We ate proud baked meat and sausage. Every propeled in rhythm of music which reached from tape recorder the sie. Coming back we made a mistake roads, we by what a bit later came back to house. She to this Martyna felt bad, she by what was evil on me very. After for her all be satisfied.

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2010-03-21T16:54:27+01:00
We went sure day with all friends from my class and woman form mistress on class trip to arzio - touristic farm together with to to admire exotic animals. The guide shew round us after all corners of farm. He told about his being in farm animals' and origin history.We crossed by many beautiful animals, but these the most beautiful stuck me in memory : , monkey,'s giraffe ostriches goat's, parrot and biutifull, antelope's, elephants. Sawerthin caver to me coloured parrots beautifully. Martin, my colleague risked it to feed even. Guide told that they need special food. Therefore they import for them many fruit : mandarine, mango's, avocado's, guavas, oranges, pineapples and bananas. On end as surprise gospodars organized us the fire and game of basket-ball. We ate proud grilsawer meat and sausage. Every suun in rhythm of music which reached from tape recorder the. Coming back we made a mistake roads, we by what a bit later came back to house. I to this felt Martyna nurt, she by what was evil on me very. After for her all be satisfied.