When I was eleven years old I had best friend Ania. We still spent all time together. I liked her so much and she liked me too. Once we argued about something. I don't remember why. We stoped talking together and she faked that she didn't see me. It was ridiculous. I was sad and depressed. I wanted again be her best friend. Later I had birthday and I invited her to my house. I then reconciled with Ania. We are friends to date.
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It was Mai. I had birthday soon. I wanna get wonderful Barbie-doll with accessories. In day my birthday I dressed my favourite dress and I couldn't wait to opened gifts. I blowed candles and I began opening presents. I was very excited. I saw piece of something pink. I was delighted I then thought that it was dress of barbie. But I was wrong. It was ridiculous awful pink skirt. I was very disappointed and shocked. I don't want wearing this skirt. It was the worst girft jakikolwiek dostałam.

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2009-10-28T19:18:27+01:00
When I was eleven I had best friend. Her name was Ania. We spent all time together. I liked her very much and she liked me, too. Once time we argued about something. I don't remember why. We stoped talk together and she faked that she didn't see me. It was silly. I was sad and depressed. I wanted again be her best friend. Later I had birthday and I invited her to my house, Then I talked with Ania. We are friends for today.
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It was Mai. I had birthday. I wanted to get wonderful Barbie-doll with accessories. In day of my birthday I dressed my favourite dress and I couldn't wait to open gifts. I blowed candles and I began opening presents. I was very excited. I saw piece of something pink. I was delighted, then I thought that it was dress of barbie, but I was wrong. It was ridiculous pink skirt. I was very disappointed and shocked. I didn't want to wear this skirt. It was the worst present I've ever get.

ogólnie ładnie napisane zdania, jedynie kilka małych błędów odnośnie -ed i niektórych wyrazów albo zabrakło albo ich było za dużo ;)

pzdr, DzIaRa ;*