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Hi Ania


I'm going to buy karolina jewelry. I'm going to give her earrings or chain. She likes jewelry

Karolina interested in music. She likes pop, rock and hip-hop. You going to give her music Cd. She will be happy.
Why don't give her? She don't like books and teddy bear. I going to go the cinema with Karolina. Do you want to come with us?

Karolina's going to come on Saturday to the sleepover with me. We will watch films and listen music .

See you soon.


PS:When are you going to visit me?


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2010-03-24T17:09:43+01:00
Hi Ania


I'm going to buy karolina jewelry. I'm going to give her earrings or chain. She likes jewelry

Karolina interested in music. She likes pop, rock and hip-hop. You going to give her music Cd. She will be happy.
Why don't give her? She don't like books and teddy bear. I going to go the cinema with Karolina. Do you want to come with us?

Karolina's going to come on Saturday to the sleepover with me. We will watch films and listen music . Hope you are well.

See you soon.


PS:When are you going to visit me?

teraz jest ok
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2010-03-24T17:16:30+01:00
Według mnie wszystko ok
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2010-03-24T17:22:32+01:00
Hi Ania


How are you?I'm good.But there's something i have to say to you.On Saturday night i'm going on Karolina's birthday party. I'm going to buy her jewelry. I'm going to give her earrings or chain(tudzież i'll give her). She likes jewelry(albo she really like it)

Karolina interested in music. She likes pop, rock and hip-hop. You going to give her music Cd.(Grzeczniej byłoby użyć Could you give her music Cd?) She will be happy.
Why don't give her?(to zdanie mi tu zupełnie nie pasuje,bo oznacza-dlaczego miałabyś/łbyś jej nie dać?) She don't like books and teddy bear. I going to go the cinema with Karolina. Do you want to come with us?

Karolina's going to come on Saturday to the sleepover with me. We will watch films and listen music . Hope you are well.(warto dodać i'm looking forward to meet you-nie mogę się doczekać spotkania z Tobą)

See you soon.(I niżej podpis).
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