Mam do napisanie list nie formalny jestem na obozie młodzieżowym napisz list do koleżanki w którym
-napiszesz gdzie jesteś i jak długo tam będziesz
-napisz jaki jest cel obozu i jak się o nim dowiedziałaś
-podaj jakie narodowości są pozostali uczestnicy obozu i napisz o ciekawej osobie którą poznałaś
-wyraź opinie na temat obozu i obiecaj że wyślesz zdjęcie

Moją prośba to czy ktoś mógłby sprawdzić czy ten list zawiera wszystkie punkty i czy jest napisany poprawnie pod względem gramatycznym jeśli ni proszę podać błędy z góry dziękuje:)


For a week I am at the international camp on Malta, it is great. About this camp I found the information in the Internet this excellent connecting the active learning of the English with summer rest. I just came back around Valletta there is this most beautiful place worldwide. There delicious ice-cream and cookies. I got to know a lot of people different nationalities among others of people from Austria, of Spain, Italian, of Bulgaria, of Sweden, of Netherlands. I made friends with the handsome Italian Lorenzo has eighteen years old and he is very nice. I spent the entire afternoon with him yesterday. He told me about himself and about Italians which have the very interesting culture, one day I will go there. Tomorrow we have the trip to Cumino but later bonfire. It is here very beautifully and people are nice but too together crazy the same as I. I am coming back in two weeks longingly behind you. promises that tomorrow he will certainly send you the photograph.

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For a week I am at the international camp on Malta, it is great. About this camp I found the information in the Internet this excellent connecting the active learning of the English with summer rest. I just came back around Valletta there is this most beautiful place worldwide. There is delicious ice-cream and cookies. I got to know a lot of people different nationalities among others people from Austria, Spain, Italian, Bulgaria, Sweden and Netherlands. I made friends with the handsome Italian Lorenzo. He's eighteen and he is very nice. I spent the entire afternoon with him yesterday. He told me about himself and about Italians which have the very interesting culture, one day I will go there. There will be a travel tomorrow to Cumimo, and then bonfire. It is here beautifully and people are nice, and everyone are the same as crazy as I. I am coming back in two weeks. Longingly behind you. I promise that tomorrow I will certainly send you the photograph.