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Dear Tom!
Hi, how are you? It was a nice surprice to hear from you again after so many months. In this e-mail I would like to tell you about my school. My school is quite big. Around the school is lot of greenary and two playgrounds. In my school there are three gyms, a library, a small shop, a canteen, three informatic rooms with modern computers and languagelabs. Close by a gym there are cloakrooms. My favourite subjects are maths, physics, chemistry and PE, on which we play in volleybal and basketball. I am good at science. One the subject, which i do not like is the History, because I do not learning by heart. My favourite teachers are Mrs Beata Czewonka, Mrs Monika Cyran, and Mr Wojciech Krycka, bacause they are nice and helpful. I always can count on them. I usually have six or seven lessons. In my schoool are extra classes , for example: mathematical, chemical, biological. I go only on the chemical, where we do experience. I have a lot of fomework every day. In my school we do not wear unifors. In winter we can not go outside. Both teachers and student look after the school and their classrooms. Classes are spacious and neat. Pupils can pleasantly spend thetime at school, talk with friends, laugh. Various competitions are organized at schhol. The friendly atmosphery is the trump of my school. Well, that is all for now. Looking forward to hearing from you. Lots of love. Sylwia

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Dear Tom!
Hi and how are you? It was a nice surprise to hear something from you again after so many months. In this e-mail I would like to tell you about my school. My school is quite big. Around the school there is a lot of greenary and two playgrounds. In my school are 3 gyms, a library, a small shop, a canteen, three informatic rooms with modern computers and languagelabs. Close by a gym there are cloakrooms. My favourite subjects are maths, physics, chemistry and PE, on which we play volleybal and basketball. I am good at science. One subject, which i don't like is History, because I do not learning it by heart. My favourite teachers are Mrs Beata Czewonka, Mrs Monika Cyran, and Mr Wojciech Krycka, beacuse they are very nice and helpful. I always can count on them. I usually have six or seven lessons. In my schoool are extra classes, for example: mathematical, chemical, biological. I go only to the chemical, where we do experiences. I have a lot of homework every day. In my school we don't wear uniforms. In winter we can't go outside. Both teachers and students look after the school and their classrooms. Classes are spacious and neat. Pupils can pleasantly spend them time at school, talk with friends, laugh. Various competitions are organized at school. Friendly atmosphere is the trump of my school. Well, that is all for now. I looking forward to hearing from you.
Lot of love,
Sylwia.