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Dear editor.
I'm writing in connection with Edward Punch article 'Why TV is bad for us' witch appeared in your newspaper last Friday.I have to say I totally agree with this article.
First of all,argument that TV encourage us to be lazy is true.Often we spend all us free time in front of the television.We stop walk,read,meet with friends and stay with people.We are alone in front of the TV.
Next TV often gives us trivial version of the news.It's very good argument becouse TV doesn't reall explain the news of the world.We often don't understand why some problems started.
Finally ,Edward says that violence is always the best answer.We heard that teenagers kild they parents,friends because they can't find answer in everydays eproblems.Young people move to worst answer,because they don't have good model.
Yours faithfully
XYZ

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2010-04-06T16:51:43+02:00
Dear editor.

I'm writing in connection with Edward Punch article 'Why TV is bad for us' which appeared in your newspaper last Friday. I have to say I absolutely agree with this text.

First of all, the argument that TV makes us lazy is true. We often spend the whole time in front of the boob tube. We stop walking, reading, meeting with friends and staying with people.We are so alone.

Secondly, I want to say that TV often gives us trivial version of the news. It's very good argument because TV doesn't really explain the information of the world. We often don't understand why some problems started.

Finally, Edward is saying that violence is always the best answer. We're hearing that teenagers are killing their parents or friends because they can't find answers for their problems. In fact they don't have a good model to behave and often don't know how to find a solution.

Yours faithfully
XYZ