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Dear Agata
Thanks for yuor message.It was great to hear from you.Well I'm in Gdańsk on holiday.There is super,though on start I was loneliness.But I meet a nice guy.He's Damian,he's twenty and he's a fireman.But I write to say about Anna and her boy.
We arrived by coach over the sea and it unfortunately get wrong.So we sit in a cafe.Anna was dressed to tight T-shirt and shorts so he felt cold.One boy see that and gives her jumper.He's Marcin,he have dark,short hair,blue eyes and he was well-bild.Then they spend much time together.Marcin was romantic.He's give Anna rose each days.They fallen in love.
I think that unexpect love is beautiful.What do you think about that?
I don't sleep very well,so I'm going to bed.
Write soon!
love XYZ

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2010-04-06T18:31:05+02:00
Dear Agata,
Thanks for your last letter. It was great to hear from you. Well, I'm in Gdańsk on holiday. It's great here ,though at the beginng I felt very lonely. But I've met such a nice guy. He's Damian. He's twenty and works as a fireman. But I'm writing to tell you about Anna and her boyfriend.
We arrived here by coach over the sea and it unfortunately got wrong. So we sat in a cafe. Anna was wearing a tight T-shirt and shorts so she felt very cold. One boy noticed this and gave her his warm jumper. It was Marcin. He has got dark,short hair,blue eyes and is well-built. They spent much time together. Marcin was so romantic. He gave Anna a beautiful rose every days.They've fallen in love.
I think this unexpected love is very beautiful. What do you think about that?
Write to me soon!
Love,
XYZ

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niestey nie rozumiem co chcialas na pisac w tym zdaniu po "We arrived..." wiec nie moglam go poprawic