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Zadanie: Napisz historyjkę zatytułowaną: "How the zebras got it strips".

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Once upon time in the grassy grounds of Africa lived herd of white Zebras. They were very very happy and satisfied of their peaceful and safe lives.

One day Zebra S asked Zebra Z: "Have you heard that Zebra M is dead?"
"What? Are you insane? I saw it few days ago..."
"Zebra M was attacked by the Lion."
"O! That's terrifying!" - Zebra Z said.

Zebra Z and S went to water to the river. On the way they met Zebra O who told them about next victim - Zebra B.

The whole herd was shocked, confused at the same time. It was huge tragedy for everyone. They decided to go to the King of Animals and ask him for help.


When they came there the King od Animals said: "I can't help you by wounding Lion. It would be inappropriate but I may give you another solution: You will get strips. When you will be together no one will be able to hurt you. Do you agree with me?"

"Of course" - all Zebras said.

Next day when they woke up, they have black stripes on theirs bodies.

"We look so funny" - said Zebra Z
"I know but how will it help us?" - Zebra S asked.
"We'll see."

After few weeks the Lion came to their herd. They gather and stand in silent. The Lion head was spinning and it passed out.

It turned out that the strips camouflaged Zebras and the Lion got ocular ataxia (oczopląs).

So, now Zebras can live as safe as they had been living before the Lion appeared.

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2010-04-12T23:20:25+02:00
One day Zebra S asked Zebra Z: "Have you heard that Zebra M is dead?"
"What? Are you insane? I saw it few days ago..."
"Zebra M was attacked by the Lion."
"O! That's terrifying!" - Zebra Z said.

Zebra Z and S went to water to the river. On the way they met Zebra O who told them about next victim - Zebra B.

The whole herd was shocked, confused at the same time. It was huge tragedy for everyone. They decided to go to the King of Animals and ask him for help.


When they came there the King od Animals said: "I can't help you by wounding Lion. It would be inappropriate but I may give you another solution: You will get strips. When you will be together no one will be able to hurt you. Do you agree with me?"

"Of course" - all Zebras said.

Next day when they woke up, they have black stripes on theirs bodies.

"We look so funny" - said Zebra Z
"I know but how will it help us?" - Zebra S asked.
"We'll see."

After few weeks the Lion came to their herd. They gather and stand in silent. The Lion head was spinning and it passed out.

It turned out that the strips camouflaged Zebras and the Lion got ocular ataxia (oczopląs).

So, now Zebras can live as safe as they had been living before the Lion appeared.


Było tylko kilka pozjadanych liter. =]