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I get up at 6 o'clock every morning. I go to bathroom to take a shower, and then i eat breakfast, usually a sandwich. My bus, which takes me to school every morning arrives 10 past 7 a.m.
I'm at school till 15 o'clock. Immediately after coming back home, i eat a dinner. My mum always prepares me something very good, and after hard day at school, I eat it with a pleasure. After an hour or so, I go to do my homework. After that i always have a free time. I watch tv, play games or go to park.
Finally, after all day i go sleeping.