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Hugh Laurie was born in 11 July 1959 in Oxford. He is a medium-build actor. He has got short dark hair, blue eyes and a beard. He started his career in “Who Sold You This, Then?” in 1975. He’s famous for his role in “M.D. House”, where his character always seems to be funny, selfish and smart. He’s a boss of the diagnostics ward in the hospital in the New Jersey. I like his different point of view and his extraordinarity. The viewers especially fond of his rudeness. With his prickly comments he can struggle with his workers.



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Wydaje mi się ,że tak.
chociaż moim zdaniem mogła byś w czwartym zdaniu wyrzucić ,,his"