Czy mogli byście sprawdzić to wypracowanie. Napisałam je sama, ale że nie jestem zbyt dobra z anglika to proszę was o pomoc. Nie jest to jakieś bardzo ambitne wypracowanie, ot taka sobie krótka historyjka.
When I was 10 years old I had strange dream. It was raining and cold night. The same as in my dream.
I "woke up" in my bedroom. But i saw one difference. In the corner room was big, ols clock. When he striked 12.00 pm, from the iside left my best friend. But she was strange, terrifying. She had old skin and was ugly! She looked like corpse. I was very frightened. Suddenly into my room went more zombies. I started screaming.The corpses began approach to me, I felt the cold fingers on my neck. I started to stifle.
Then I woke up. And for a long time I couldn't sleep. I felt like a long, cold fingers still touch my skin.